A) 5 SAMPLES: Story/Quote/dramatic, important example

1)A Dramatic example: Over 17,000 deaths due to infection during civil war. Bullet wounds that were not fatal killed 8 out of 10 times when infection set in. Open fractures from being thrown around after an explosion often became infected, and then killed 4 out of 10 times. This was merely a preview of what was to come until world war I and beyond, until the achievements of anti-biotics became a life saver on the battlefield.

2)Dramatic example: the only person who could make achievement: Mountain Climbing is a sport about challenging one self to do the seemingly impossible. Climbing Everest is considered by most a challenge far beyond all but a handful of the best mountain climbers. So could anyone ever even imagine a man who can’t see trying and succeeding at climbing Everest? That’s exactly what ____________ did: the first and possibly the only blind man to scale the earth’s largest mountain.

3) A quote that summarizes/exemplifies the achiever/achievement: “Sometimes Leaders make the moment, sometimes the moment makes leaders.”

While Guliani had been a mayor watched and study for his successes in reducing crime and running a city infamous for going over its budget, it was 9-11 – the moment that opened the war on terrorism – that made and marked him as one of the most incredible leaders at the start of the 21^st century.

4) Story Someone enjoying benefit of XXXXX: Mary Pollock drives her kids to school every morning, then goes to work, eats lunch with her coworkers, goes home, and closes the evening with happy conversation with her family and children. She recharges her portable dialysis, allowing her to go to bed after just about 10 minutes of work on her health. Ten years ago, her kidneys all but destroyed by infection, she would be lucky to be alive – at best going for special treatments every two days at a hospital. Now thanks to the invention of the portable dialysis she can enjoy an almost normal life.

5) Tell a story: What if the achievement hadn’t happened?